The video starts strong with an attention-grabbing hook, using strong language and controversy to spark interest. It maintains coherence throughout, discussing the ethics and responsibility of influencers in the cryptocurrency industry. The speaker’s genuine concern for their fans creates a personal connection. Additionally, the video addresses a relevant and trending topic. Some potential improvements could include providing more examples or evidence to support the speaker’s viewpoint and offering specific suggestions on how influencers can be more responsible in the cryptocurrency industry.